HelpaHand Introduction Motion Graphic | Revisions







R1 "From second 9, the problems stated should be following by pictures that relate to that particular problem, not a whole bunch of images that have nothing to do with them. Each image of the problem uttered (illness, natural disaster, loss of a job, etc.) would have to appear just as the problem is cited, just like the first 8 seconds."



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*Update: Timing got fixed*




R2 "At second 19, the image of a woman with a laptop does not conjure up arrival of help. Perhaps someone with a smile looking toward a bright horizon in a landscape picturesque would."



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*Update: Timing got fixed*




R3 "a. At second 28, the dashboard page reads: "Land me a helping hand." We both know what "land" means. It has no business to be used here. I suggest the following: "Lending a Helping Hand" b. "Join" and "Donate" buttons should not be appearing on this page. c. There is no Due Date on my platform. e. Dollar sign ($) in the U.S. is used before digits. f. The number of donors and the goal amount ($) should be written on this page. Question: are they not? g. Let's not get too hung up on color blue. I prefer the color of the heart to change to red. "



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R1 "At second 36, the image of the smiling woman with the laptop doesn't capture "the moment" and the message. I understand its use to some extent, but I think we should use a different image. Nothing comes to my mind right now. I'll let you know when I think of something. Meanwhile, feel free to think of one."



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